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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 3:26 pm

pna wrote:That one was a bit tough to read I gotta say, well you know which one of them is the toughie one.

I have thought about possibly doing a sequel to that one, but I haven't been able to decide yet. :? I also don't know if I do do a sequel to it if it should be in 1st person like the original story or if I should do it in 3rd person like all the other stories I've done.
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 3:31 pm

Ah, it would be nice, it ended pretty sweet, and I pictured myself them together even after the story is done, but it could be fun to see how you've made up your mind about it after it.
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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 3:38 pm

A couple of things/scenes I had in mind for that story if I did continue was one to have Sarah fall when she's trying to get out of bed and into hr wheelchair and Chuck hears her fall and goes into her room and picks her up and helps her get into her wheelchair. Or the opposite of that and she falls trying to get to her bed and Chuck picks her up off the floor and puts her in bed.

Another scene involved Chuck telling Ellie, who didn't know where he was that he was never coming home and he was going move out where he was and to bring his things out to him. He wasn't sure where he was gonna live yet though. And when Ellie shows up she learns that the friend Chuck is currently staying with is in a wheelchair and then later learns that it's Sarah.
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 3:45 pm

Good ideas. Do they share bed in the future? :roll:

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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 3:48 pm

Well since he and Sarah haven't seen each other in six years, he stays in a guest room and he's not sure if he will live in the same house with Sarah, staying in the guest room or if he'll find his own place nearby.

Mommy got tattled on. :P

“Daddy! Daddy! Daddy! the twins squealed in echo fashion. “Look at what we made Daddy!”

“That's a very nice tower. You two did a great job,” Chuck said looking at his children's creation.

“Mommy knocked it down with her stick.”

“Cane,” Isabel corrected. Me and Zaya had to build it again. Mommy helped too.”
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 3:51 pm

Ah, ye. :(

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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 3:57 pm

Well he couldn't just move into Sarah's house and stay in her room after being apart for so long and they had barely even developed any kind of relationship when they were separated and a lot has changed during that time, especially with all that happened to Sarah. He'd have to get to know her all over again and they would both have to decide what kind of relationship they can have now. Do they stay friends or do they start a romance.

Yeah. Isabel calls her brother, Zaya. That's cute.
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:01 pm

I understand and get that but well you know how I am, I always want them to be together. :D
Let's see what the future(you that is) have in hands for them if you ever make that sequel.

I did get a little confused and it nearly made me thing I had forgot the boy's name, :oops:
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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:05 pm

Chuck is also kind of afraid of Sarah, or rather afraid of hurting her. He's scared of touching her with all her scars and her being in a wheelchair. He thinks he would hurt her if he did. :(

She's little and can't quite say Isaiah,so she says Zaya.
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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:11 pm

Mhm hmh, that's sad that he thinks he would hurt her if he did, a bit understandable but still when it's charah - I'm just used to read all these 100 % fluffy ones you know. :D

That's sweet. :) I called my big sister Ara when I where around the twins age, her name is Sara but I couldn't say S for quite some time, did have to go to a person that made me train it up. :lol:
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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:14 pm

That's why Chuck reacts the way he does in the story. He reaches his hand out toward my face, but at the last second he pulls back. He's afraid to touch my scarred flesh. When his hand recoils from my face, a tear flows down the cheek he refused to touch. Sarah thinks that Chuck is too grossed out to touch her, but when it reality he's scared he'd cause her pain if he did. :(
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:21 pm

Aw, it's really sad and it dosen't gets better by her, what the thing was called now again, the disablity that made her not being able to speak. :cry:

Hmm, the time did sure run away from me, it was just 22 and now it's 01. :?
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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:30 pm

Aphonia. Yeah, her scars are permanent fixtures on her skin and the cut to her throat took away her ability to speak and she's paralyzed and unable to walk or use her legs anymore. She's had six years to get used to all of that and in the story Chuck has only had a few minutes, most of it being spent in shock.
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:35 pm

:|

I changed browser today from Firefox to Chrome so I don't get fast to the websites by typing in the first letter in the browser so I google'd Hotski to get to my fanfic-acc and got in to Urban Dictonary's Hotski page and the example on the second one was "Two bangin chicks' 'Damnnnnn, hotski bitches!'" Say what? :? :lol:

With that I'm off, let's see if I can drag myself from Family Guy tomorrow.
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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:46 pm

Yeah, Sarah needs her notebook and her wheelchair in that story. Those two things are very important to her. She can't communicate with anyone without her notebook and without her wheelchair she's froze in place and can't move. Well she can reach for things and move the top half of her body but she can't move her legs or get anywhere since she's completely paralyzed from the waist down.

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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:55 pm

you just love seriously crippling Sarah in your stories, don't you, AY?
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:56 pm

Dear God! Can i get a nap without having something happen that I wish I was awake for. The pursuit of sleep has failed me yet again
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:57 pm

coreymon77 wrote:you just love seriously crippling Sarah in your stories, don't you, AY?

That story was about the depths of Sarah's love for Chuck. How much she was willing to go through for him to protect him because of how much he meant to her.
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PostTue Mar 20, 2012 4:59 pm

Yes, I get that, but if she's not blind, she's deaf, if she's not deaf she's paralyzed, mute and horribly scarred.
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Re: OT: Random

PostTue Mar 20, 2012 5:07 pm

coreymon77 wrote:Yes, I get that, but if she's not blind, she's deaf, if she's not deaf she's paralyzed, mute and horribly scarred.

Well, instead of going the predictable or usual or anything like that way of telling a story about unconditional love and things like that. In the deaf story, she was born that way and has never known what it's like to hear and is proud of who she is and doesn't consider deafness to be a disability or anything like that. I also like to give people something to think about in my stories. Stories that will make them feel something and not something they just read and forget about.

I have had a request to do a story about Chuck getting injured some way permanently and have been thinking about that too. The deaf story was also a request. One made by two people separately actually.
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